It has been believed that people who read for pleasure have developed imagination and good language skills than people who prefer to watch TV.To what extent do you agree or disagree?正文:I think that people who prefer to reading will be better at developing imaginative thinking and good linguistic(语言的,是形容词) skills.What should be pointed out at the very beginning is that reading makes people to be more imaginative.Without various kinds of sense organ,there is just a book with words on it.As the saying goes,there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes.(句号,句子太长啦)When we get in touch with the book,we read it with our own imagination.There is no doubt that reading is the origin of creation.Another indispensable part of my consideration is that reading promotes linguistics and our writings convey.The more we read,The more sensible we will be at the usage of grammar and article's organization.For instance,when we read literary works especially those famous ones,we could quote the classics and make our essay more convincing.Admittedly,there is no denying that learning things by TV could bring us the pleasure of vision and the sense of hearing.What's more,it could correct our wrong pronunciation.But the advantage of reading should not be neglected.As a mass media,TV tries to cover every aspect that may happen in people's life,which means it turns out to be too simple to learn at the same time.Compared to this,books may be more narrow but more profound. 看了,没有语法错误,句式,语句结构,语法都没有问题.不过感觉:你那第二段实在太短了点,for instance后面,可以加多几句空话,像 “这能增加我们对语言的掌控力/表现出我们的文化水平/xxxxxxx". 而且感觉段落有点短,一段最好要超过6句比较好呢.。
名言警句在雅思写作的过程中是很好用的东西,这点肯定大家都是到,但是名言警句在雅思写作中也是一把双刃剑,运用的好非常加分,运用的不好、生搬硬套、为了用名言警句而用名言警句这些会让你的雅思写作因此而丢分,那么如何才能巧妙的在雅思写作中运用名言警句呢? 在雅思写作考试中,曾有考到富国是否要帮助发展中或者尚待发展的国家和地区的考题,如: Should rich countries offer assistance to those underdeveloped and undeveloped ones? 总统讲话中则提到了富国提供帮助的好处:他认为当今世界就是一个相互联系的地球村,该举使得双方受益,无论是帮助方还是接受帮助方。
In 1979, trade between the United States and China stood at roughly $5 billion -- today it tops over $400 billion each year. The commerce affects our people's lives in so many ways. America imports from China many of the computer parts we use, the clothes we wear; and we export to China machinery that helps power your industry. This trade could create even more jobs on both sides of the Pacific, while allowing our people to enjoy a better quality of life. And as demand becomes more balanced, it can lead to even broader prosperity. I've said many times that I believe that our world is now fundamentally interconnected. The jobs we do, the prosperity we build, the environment we protect, the security that we seek -- all of these things are shared. 总统也提到了体育发展对于全人类的意义,同样,这个内容可以运用于以下这个考题: Why it is important to develop sports? 总统讲话内容: And in 1979, the connections among our people were limited. Today, we see the curiosity of those ping-pong players manifested in the ties that are being forged across many sectors. Yao Ming is just one signal of our shared love of basketball. 我们都知道环境问题是雅思议论文中一个比较热门的考题,我们曾经遇到过: The environmental problems are becoming worse. What can we do to help to make it better?/ Some people say that solving environmental problems should only be the government concern, companies and individuals can hardly make any effort. What is your opinion? 总统讲话中关于环境的内容还是比较多的,总统认为中国和美国作为两个世界大国,应该在环境问题的解决上起到领导和主导作用。政府应当首当其冲的站在一个积极保护环境的立场。
In the United States, I think we are learning how to develop buildings that use much less energy, that are much more energy-efficient. And I know that with Shanghai, as I traveled and I saw all the cranes and all the new buildings that are going up, it's very important for us to start incorporating these new technologies so that each building is energy-efficient when it comes to lighting, when it comes to heating. And so it's a terrific opportunity I think for us to learn from each other. So let me give you a specific example, and that is the issue we were just discussing of climate change. The United States and China are the world's two largest emitters of greenhouse gases, of carbon that is causing the planet to warm. Now, the United States, as a highly developed country, as I said before, per capita, consumes much more energy and emits much more greenhouse gases for each individual than does China. On the other hand, China is growing at a much faster pace and it has a much larger population. So unless both of our countries are willing to take critical steps in dealing with this issue, we will not be able to resolve it. 讲话中总统还运用了美国本土的俚语:I don't know if there's a similar saying in China -- we have a saying: "You made your bed, now you have to sleep in it." 而这句话用在雅思犯罪类的作文里是再贴切不过的了,类似于中文的“咎由自取”。 在总统讲话中,还有多处提到了教育问题,文化融合问题,科技进步问题,这些问题都和雅思议论文密切相关,不失为一篇好的学习写作的背景文章。
感谢您关注智课网(SmartStudy) Culture-Education TopicEducation carries the sense of a kind of learningestablishing set-up where people are taught or trained in their minds,characters and abilities.Culture is a part of our life which involves thecustoms, beliefs, art, music, and all the other products of human thought madeby a particular group of people at a particular time.I see two kinds of pressure working on college students today:economic pressure, parental pressure.It is easy to look around for villains—to blame the colleges forcharging too much money, the parents for pushing theirchildren too far. But there are no villains, only victims.The pressure is heavy on students who just want to graduate andget a job.Long gone are the days when students journeyed through collegewith a certain relaxation, sampling a wide variety ofcourses that would send them out as liberally educated men and women.If I were an employer I would rather employ graduates who havethis range and curiosity than those who narrowly pursued safe subjects and highgrades. I know countless students whose inquiring minds exhilarate me. I like to hear the play of their ideas. I don't care. I don't know if they are getting As or Cs. and I don't care. I also like them as people. The country needs them, and they will findsatisfying jobs. I tell them to relax. They can't.Nor can I blame them. They live in a brutal economy.Today it is not unusual for a student, even if he works parttime at college and full time during the summer, to accrue $5000 in loans after graduation.Upon graduation, encouraged to step into society,he is already behind as he goes forth. How could he not feelunder pressure in order to keep up with the times?Along with economic pressure goes parental pressure. Inevitably, the two are deeply intertwined.Poor students. They are caught in one of theoldest webs of love and duty and guilt. The parents mean well;they are trying to steer their sons and daughters toward a securefuture. But the sons and daughters toward a secure future. But the sons and daughters want to major in history or classics orphilosophy—subjects with no 'practical' value. Where's the payoff onthe humanities? It's not easy to persuade such loving parents that thehumanities do indeed pay off. The intellectual facultiesdeveloped by studying subjects like history and classics are just the facultiesthat make creative leaders in business or almost any general field.In kindergartens, there are many educationalfacilities from which children can benefit.Mothers can concentrate on their work and advancetheir careers, which is also helpful to the social development.Students can get opportunities to experience atotally different culture.Children will suffer from loneliness andhomesickness.It is said that mothers know what is most suitablefor their children.Some think that the school should be moreresponsible for children's education compared with the parents.Living on the campus brings us great benefits.Living on the campus is beneficial to the studentsnot only academically but also psychologically.Many students are not used to taking care ofthemselves.Family plays an important role in shaping children'scharacters.What we should do is to tell children how to solvethese problems properly.Nowadays, there are more and more young people goingabroad for study.Whether young people should study abroad should beleft to individuals to judge.It should be left to individuals to judge whetheryoung people should study abroad.From what I have mentioned above, it is notdifficult to get the conclusion that students should go abroad to study.When one finishes his study abroad, he will havemore opportunities for his future career.A country only depending on its tradition will neverbecome a powerful nation.They hold that people are forgetting theirtradition, history and culture.This will eventually undermine national culture byencouraging the spread and popularization of western customs and values.A country only depending on its tradition will neverbecome a powerful nation.The critics argue that the practice does notcoincide with the present-day civilized world in which liberty andindividuality are highly worshiped.If we tear down the old buildings, we are mining thecultural heritage and the traditional value as well.What we should do is to tell children how to solvethese problems properly.Children do not have enough experience.The parents have devoted all their energy to takingcare of their children.Young people should be encouraged to take pan inmore meaningful and valuable activities such as reading, studying andexercising.To dispel loneliness and ki。
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感谢您关注智课网(SmartStudy) Culture-Education TopicEducation carries the sense of a kind of learningestablishing set-up where people are taught or trained in their minds,characters and abilities.Culture is a part of our life which involves thecustoms, beliefs, art, music, and all the other products of human thought madeby a particular group of people at a particular time.I see two kinds of pressure working on college students today:economic pressure, parental pressure.It is easy to look around for villains—to blame the colleges forcharging too much money, the parents for pushing theirchildren too far. But there are no villains, only victims.The pressure is heavy on students who just want to graduate andget a job.Long gone are the days when students journeyed through collegewith a certain relaxation, sampling a wide variety ofcourses that would send them out as liberally educated men and women.If I were an employer I would rather employ graduates who havethis range and curiosity than those who narrowly pursued safe subjects and highgrades. I know countless students whose inquiring minds exhilarate me. I like to hear the play of their ideas. I don't care. I don't know if they are getting As or Cs. and I don't care. I also like them as people. The country needs them, and they will findsatisfying jobs. I tell them to relax. They can't.Nor can I blame them. They live in a brutal economy.Today it is not unusual for a student, even if he works parttime at college and full time during the summer, to accrue $5000 in loans after graduation.Upon graduation, encouraged to step into society,he is already behind as he goes forth. How could he not feelunder pressure in order to keep up with the times?Along with economic pressure goes parental pressure. Inevitably, the two are deeply intertwined.Poor students. They are caught in one of theoldest webs of love and duty and guilt. The parents mean well;they are trying to steer their sons and daughters toward a securefuture. But the sons and daughters toward a secure future. But the sons and daughters want to major in history or classics orphilosophy—subjects with no 'practical' value. Where's the payoff onthe humanities? It's not easy to persuade such loving parents that thehumanities do indeed pay off. The intellectual facultiesdeveloped by studying subjects like history and classics are just the facultiesthat make creative leaders in business or almost any general field.In kindergartens, there are many educationalfacilities from which children can benefit.Mothers can concentrate on their work and advancetheir careers, which is also helpful to the social development.Students can get opportunities to experience atotally different culture.Children will suffer from loneliness andhomesickness.It is said that mothers know what is most suitablefor their children.Some think that the school should be moreresponsible for children's education compared with the parents.Living on the campus brings us great benefits.Living on the campus is beneficial to the studentsnot only academically but also psychologically.Many students are not used to taking care ofthemselves.Family plays an important role in shaping children'scharacters.What we should do is to tell children how to solvethese problems properly.Nowadays, there are more and more young people goingabroad for study.Whether young people should study abroad should beleft to individuals to judge.It should be left to individuals to judge whetheryoung people should study abroad.From what I have mentioned above, it is notdifficult to get the conclusion that students should go abroad to study.When one finishes his study abroad, he will havemore opportunities for his future career.A country only depending on its tradition will neverbecome a powerful nation.They hold that people are forgetting theirtradition, history and culture.This will eventually undermine national culture byencouraging the spread and popularization of western customs and values.A country only depending on its tradition will neverbecome a powerful nation.The critics argue that the practice does notcoincide with the present-day civilized world in which liberty andindividuality are highly worshiped.If we tear down the old buildings, we are mining thecultural heritage and the traditional value as well.What we should do is to tell children how to solvethese problems properly.Children do not have enough experience.The parents have devoted all their energy to takingcare of their children.Young people should be encouraged to take pan inmore meaningful and valuable activities such as reading, studying andexercising.To dispel loneliness and 。
我的意见是:小作文可以参考《雅思8分万能作文》(大作文看一点就好,因为实在写得太高超了,学不来.) 大作文看《十天突破雅思作文》,看TR什么什么的那个法则,看4个重点句怎么用,看同义词怎么转换(不要小看这个,多样的词汇绝对是加分项目.),看思路怎么组织,不用很长时间,但重点篇目要多看几次.总的来说,这本书我真的很喜欢,帮我的小作文水平提高了不少,背一下里面的好句子,灵活运用,整个档次就提上去了.但大作文确实不是普通人就能领悟的,如果不是奔着8分作文去,那还是拿些时间去看看其他吧.(虽然觉得自己很像在卖广告,但这是我的真实感觉,上次考的时候,一气呵成就写了200字,考试时比较顺手~)。
我就是这种情况,从5.5提高到6.我第一次考了5.5是因为完全参考的慎小嶷的十天那本书,然后总结了自己的模板,但框架完全是人家的,考完本以为写的还不错,但分数出来吓死自己了,然后我就跟认识的老师咨询,才知道雅思最忌讳那些人人都用的模板,批卷老师看一眼就知道你的情况了,所以他建议我开始学会如何看别人的作文,模板不可用,但是里面的漂亮句子绝对可以引用,就是说每一篇文章要有自己的素材,加上别人的好句子,再加上例子要精辟,要真实(会编),最后就是会把握时间,要尽量写多些.。
It has been believed that people who read for pleasure have developed imagination and good language skills than people who prefer to watch TV.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
正文:
I think that people who prefer to reading will be better at developing imaginative thinking and good linguistic(语言的,是形容词) skills.
What should be pointed out at the very beginning is that reading makes people to be more imaginative.Without various kinds of sense organ,there is just a book with words on it.As the saying goes,there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes.(句号,句子太长啦)When we get in touch with the book,we read it with our own imagination.There is no doubt that reading is the origin of creation.
Another indispensable part of my consideration is that reading promotes linguistics and our writings convey.The more we read,The more sensible we will be at the usage of grammar and article's organization.For instance,when we read literary works especially those famous ones,we could quote the classics and make our essay more convincing.
Admittedly,there is no denying that learning things by TV could bring us the pleasure of vision and the sense of hearing.What's more,it could correct our wrong pronunciation.But the advantage of reading should not be neglected.As a mass media,TV tries to cover every aspect that may happen in people's life,which means it turns out to be too simple to learn at the same time.Compared to this,books may be more narrow but more profound.
看了,没有语法错误,句式,语句结构,语法都没有问题。不过感觉:
你那第二段实在太短了点,for instance后面,可以加多几句空话,像 “这能增加我们对语言的掌控力/表现出我们的文化水平/xxxxxxx". 而且感觉段落有点短,一段最好要超过6句比较好呢。